This looks good
I'd love too see more from you, but I just wasn't in the mood to watch the entire thing or I'm sure I wuld've given you a 10 but good work from what I saw and love to see more from ya
Reviews for "Black Knights Episode 1"
This has great potential
This peice has great potential, but the sound was kind of messy, it was hard to hear what people were saying. Also, the pacing of the events in the story could use a little more work.
Pretty good, but:
The Sound was kinda lame, try getting a better mic and hire some voice actors.
Add some BG music to the fighting and add SFX to every single movement, for exaple, you missed the clanking of the armor.
Next time, try adding a custom preloader, a menu, and longer credits (gives a better look).
Also, there were some strokes made with the brush that looked wrong and i also looked like you stroked a few times, leaving un colored hole, or way to think black lines.
also try coloring with bore realistic gradiens, and make the gradients flow throught the whole model, since i noticed you colored the ear of the blonde knight in an odd way.
Humor? you dont need humor with this kind of movie.
I still voted 5, improve on those aspects and you're got yourself the bomb.
I still voted 5 btw.
Eric.
Really good
That was great.
Animation, graphics, story were all great. Youve got a really nice set up there.
But all of the sound was very ordinary. Work on that and youve got gold.
wow...
nicely done. Very eye-catching, though you have to do something about the voices, its too soft and scratchy. Other than that good job.