There were only 2 things I didn't like much...
For one: the voices were so quiet. I mean without the text most of the time I wouldn't of even known there was someone speaking. And two: The knights were using katanas and wakisashis. I mean those were Japanese swords. The knights whould of had long swords, claymores, or short swords. Other then that it was good i mean the animation was nice, and you could get the feel of the dark story. Though I think the green was a little to bright, I think maybe a purple would of done better but that didn't really matter anyway. I guess the point i am trying to make is if you fix the voices this would be pretty good and if you change the swords it would be great. Nice job so far.