Good concept, not-so-good presentation
I watched it all way through, the concept is good, the jokes are funny, but you really really really REALLY should add more music to it, or maybe even voice-samples.
"Paper Skywalker" appeared to me to be the best scene.
...and I guess that's only because it contains nackground-music.
So, if you would add more sound to it, it would get a better score.
The graphics are OK for this being your first submission.
Good job for your first!
I'll protect this because I think you have potential to make this better. I know putting your own voice in is rare and hard, so that I won't bitch about. I like the idea a lot! Dont be afraid to take too much time though! Work on the graphics a bit more (i know it takes blood and sweat), I can tell you spent time on the graphics, but need better backgrounds and the stars especially.
Work on it
I liked the general idea, but your graphics could be better. As far as audio goes: it would be better if you had more audio, try recording voices or putting in background music. Also the sound of the light saber could have used some work.
I hope that doesn't discorage you too much, I liked the idea and I would like to see fallow up episodes.
i added music.
uh, why am i saying this in a review responce?
uhoh, my mind is going. oh wait, i already knew that.
So-so.
It's a very lovely concept. The graphics weren't good, but not horrible. Needed more sound, simple background music would have done fine. It's interesting, but has a lot of room for improvement. I look forward to the next one.
'lovely', hmm thats a term you dont here very often. uh, thank you, i guess, you are a very, uh, lovely reviewer. ........
Plus 10 for effort
Minus, oh...7 for execution.
Great concept, crappy flash.