Improve it.
It is good but the story was rushed, you need to take the time to put in details or learn how to make people not notice the intainst changes of the mood, and it could be drawn better.
Reviews for "Renegades Chapter 1"
this was all right.
The sound was a bit muffled, a bit of the voices and mouthing didn't match, and the animation was a little choppy. Of course likewise, the story line seems awesome and the fighting scenes were the best. Judging by how good this was, you must have been working on this for months. And i can't wait for the next one.
But how many of these are you going to make?
pretty good
this had a pretty good storyline, and was nicely done. its really interesting, and i cant wait for the next one. good job, it was awsome.
Not to bad
nice work in fact i like it. there could be more blood and where do the eyes go?
Good, but it needs work
I like it so far, but your main problem was your animation, it was a bit too choppy in certain areas, I'm not sure if it's the graphics, or you just skipped certain parts, but I still think it was a great short.