NICE!!
Put some lyrics in it and YOUR A STAR
Reviews for "MH16: All I Want"
FairSquare responds:
If it only were as simple as that...
But thanks for the review! :-)
Nice...
I love the piano. But there is one thing I would like to point out. It sounds like you are playing full chords in the left hand. This can really bog down the music if you are so heavy in the left hand. I recommend keeping the left hand chords simpler. Instead of having full chords hit on the downbeat all the time, roll them a little instead. It will really help out a lot.
Now in the beginning I like the block chords for an intro. It sets a very somber tone for the song, and prepares the listener for what is to come. But when the song really kicks in I would roll the chords or simply simplify them. It just bogs down the song is all. Especially a lighter song like this.
Other than that slight issue this is very well written. I love when the pan flute comes in. It has a great sound, and really propels the song along nicely. It also adds a new dimension to the mix, which can do wonders for any tune.
The percussion was very appropriate. Nothing mind blowing, but completely appropriate. You did a good job mixing the percussion in with the rest of the song, and not overpowering the piece.
The strings were a nice touch. Although, they didn't seem like they were the best sounding strings for this song. I'm not sure, but I felt that something a bit duller and warmer would have been better for this song. But for the most part, the strings were a nice addition to an already solid piano piece.
5/5 and 9/10 overall. Nice work here my friend. :-)
-Gravey-
FairSquare responds:
Wow, you write reviews quickly :P
And an awesome review too, i must say!
I'll definitly try to make this song better with all the advices you've given.
Thanks!!! :D
The piano is very nice
But the first part sounds alittle bit random. When the drums kicked in - it sounded really clear and dynamic. Nice little piece you got here - just a bad day to submit >:)
Helth 5/5 9.2/10
FairSquare responds:
Nah, i don't really care about getting to the top 5. And maybe i could've replaced some notes in the beginning part, but i don't really think it sounds random :P
Anyway, thanks for the review! :-)
hehe
It's very nice. I just don't like that underlying paddy string thing at the start. It gets on my nerves. Other then that. This song deserves a 9. It could have been a little bit better but the melody was awesome. Also that flute was well placed. I think the synths you used where a tad mediocre, maybe get edirol orchestra or do some heavy mastering. I listened to this once without headphones and then again with them. The environment was much better with more immersion and you could notice the reverberation much better.
Well, good work. Keep it up! :D
FairSquare responds:
Well, i already have Edirol and the strings you hear are from Edirol :P
And i actually like the synths i used, but i guess that's just a matter of personal opinion.
Anyway, thanks for this review! :D
Feeling
Sorry I haven't been around to show my support,"But I do feel this track".I can hear those little signature keys.
Keep on!
FairSquare responds:
Thanks :-)