aww it was ok
pretty good.Not very original though...and pretty boring.Good job though...i mean it WAS your first flash
aww it was ok
pretty good.Not very original though...and pretty boring.Good job though...i mean it WAS your first flash
My Review:
Ok dude, take notes and respond if you wish:
Number one.
Two play buttons?
Number two.
Annoying next buttons = not cool
Number Three.
Too short and not an amazing storyline.
Work hard, and make the next one better :P
I christen this movie with:
2 out of 5 Points
Nice try.
Im going to change all that in part2"Shores of HELL!
You could....
You could try and put a little more movment into the scenes because not much happened just one jump and the rest was talking.
Ps.
The next buttons are gaaaaaaaaay =P
Dålig...
Du kan ju inte äns stava. Efter punkt, komma, utropstecken eller frågetecken ska det vara mellanrum. Visste inte att det fanns så obegåvade människor i Sverige. Störde mig väldigt mycket på detta, vilket sänker ner betyget avsevärt. Kvaliten på spritesen var inte särkslit hög och storyn känndes inte passande. Ett litet plus får du dock för att du är dvensk. ;)
Not bad for a first
It's not bad as your first movie, but mario movies are a bit too over-used. You should hae used a different "style" ;)