7.5/10=C+
i thought this flash was pretty good. maybe you should have added fight scene and maybe even a war. what i mean is that maybe you should add toads as soliders in the next one. maybe you should have the yoshi like horses. ok i am going to give you a bunch of ideas ok. so lets see. you should add luigi going to war with the toads. you could maybe have the color yoshi form SUPER MARIO WORLD 2. like the yellow yoshi can do a small earthquake, the red yoshi can breath out fire if it swallows a shell, green yoshi is normal, and blue yoshi can fly. also at the same time while a war is happening Mario is fighting with Bowser. you should maybe have peach fight with one of those bosses in SUPER MARIO WORLD 2. maybe luigi the same. maybe you could add bullit bill or the water billit bill. just add weponds that both good and bad has. ok i gave enough ideas for today. we could maybe chat online. if you have yahoo messenger that would great. my screen name is spiderman2thebomb, and write back. thanks for the protection point.