Too short
I don't think it's bad, far from it, I think its one of the best flashes I've ever seen. You have a intensely excellent talent for animation and exude advanced drawing skills. The sound was a good enough quality but the voice acting was below-par.
Things seemed to happen a little fast, which is okay, but they happened quickly and then nothing was resolved. You shouldn't have submitted such an incomplete storyline. If you build up to a fight scene, go ahead and have the damn fight scene. I'm sick of people thinking they need a cliffhanger ending. You should have gone further as this flash by itself is rendered useless without the help of the parts that come after it. As it stands alone, it is not worth the small amount of time despite its tight animation. Sorry, but you get a 5/10 and a 2/5.
There's more to flash than good animation.