nice.
It sounds really well put together, really upbeat, and kind of happy it that makes sense XD
I just thought that it sounded a little bit hollow, like it's missing simething, call it pazazz. But other than that, if there were a little more variation in the melody and that pazazz, This woul be epic....but for now, it's just awesome :D which really isn't much worse anyway
Keep it up, and i can't wait to here more from you.