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That was.... AWESOME!!
As previously said it has a real 'childrens book' feel to it, and personally i LOVE childrens books. I think people should read them more. Basically almost everyone is brought up with simple stories like this, but if you re-read them at an older age it holds much more meaning than you'd expect.
Seeing I am not an artist that has a right to speak I can't give you any constructive critisism.. I only know what I like or dislike.. I can't even say WHY I like or dislike things. And besides, I don't think ANY critisism is necessary, because it is perfect the way it is.
Great job with this flash. The backgrounds rocked as well!