Amazing how you combine Graphics & Sound
Amazing how you combine the music with rather simplelooking graphics. Timing is da word. This is so nicely made, I have no complaints...
Oh yes, wait! You have no preloader =O Shame on you!
Amazing how you combine Graphics & Sound
Amazing how you combine the music with rather simplelooking graphics. Timing is da word. This is so nicely made, I have no complaints...
Oh yes, wait! You have no preloader =O Shame on you!
Poorly Drawn Stick Animations.. To The Max!
From the very beginning of the Flash I see attributes that are found in 'higher level' Flash animators works. The plane flying across the sky, while the the camera went upward during the opening credits for example; it -looked- very good.. other than the graphics of course. I saw that your use of vantage points (perspective) is very good. I do think that your choice of music played a very crucial role in this animations score (even though it is only 2.58, I could see it being substantially lower or even blammed had you not used this music). Overall.. if you were to put more time and dedication into your Flashes, graphics inparticular, it would do very, very well in the Portal. Good work, I really liked it.
-aL
Quite good for a first animation.
Pretty cool. Could definitely have used something to show that the stick dude was falling during the skyboarding scene, it looks like he's just randomly floating around in the blue. Also, some good sound effects could have made it better. Graphics aren't fantastic, but they work and you can easily see what is going on. Overall, a pretty nice job.
Thanks... I ain't that good yet but, i'll look forward to it! By the way. I still don't know how to make a Loading screen and a Play button... Can anyone out there help me? (Thanks Anyway for the tip!!!)
Nice.........................
Good for a first flash.
I am pretty impressed
I was expecting it to be quite a bad flash and at first the really basic animation wasn't impressing me but I started to like it more and more as it went on.
The choices you made regarding "camera" angles and cuts were fairly spot on and there were some bits that made be really laugh.
The animation, as I'm sure you'll agree, is far from the best but there are some great little bits in there. I really loved when he started doing tricks on his metal shrapnel sky board thing.
Good work.