((( DECENT )))
Well this is pretty decent for your first animation on NG, i like the way you have some good frame by frame in here, and the story was pretty good too, i also liked that it was not too short, and how it is entertaining. The music was good. The animations were pretty decent too, but maybe next time you could add more detail to the backgrounds, and make characters instead of using sticks, its still ok though...
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