excellent
dont listen to some people, some are just smug. Obviously the vocabulary was a little limited, but thats because it wasnt in english to begin with. And there was nothing wrong with the fight scenes. I love it, good work!
Reviews for "Ninja Palitu - English"
not horrible, just overused and outdated
you need to work on your storytelling. you need to use bigger words. when you don't, it makes it sound as if a five year old child were telling the story.
your animation was above par, but a little flawed at times. but that's just what you get with flash.
your fighting needs work too, a ninja-no, no selfrespection martialartist would stand there blankly thinking "oh my god! he's swinging his staff at me!". seriously, just think it out a little more.
but besides that, that was an overall respecable attempt at a good flash movie. just a bit of constructive critisism.
god, but...
that flash had probably the best stick animation i had ever seen (in the story telling part, in the beginning) but i didnt really like the story line. it sort of bored me. but if youre wondering whether to check it out, i recomend it. its a lot like most japanese/chinese fighting movies. especially like house of flying daggers with the bamboo!
sweet!
not bad. i like how you used the fighting on the bamboo like in the moive house of the flying daggers.
GREAT
Great submission. Also hearing apocoliptica in a flash is really cool!