How you could improve..
I must admit your special effects skills are superb, however, please don't take this offencivly, I don't think your charachter designs live up to the special effects, the only charachter who I quite liked was the lotus fairy, her design was very well done. Other that that I would say the writing at the start was a little to fast, I could read it however but hey I just think it might be better slower, other than that I must applaude your music, it was amazing so cuttos to you! Can't wait till ep.2 agus failte reoite!
p.s- I can be preety picky with charachter design, it's my forte, so I may place a high priority on it. If you want any more suggestions about it just e-mail me! I LIKAH TO HELP! I think you can on my account!