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Reviews for "Taishi Ep 1: Enter Lotus"

How you could improve..

I must admit your special effects skills are superb, however, please don't take this offencivly, I don't think your charachter designs live up to the special effects, the only charachter who I quite liked was the lotus fairy, her design was very well done. Other that that I would say the writing at the start was a little to fast, I could read it however but hey I just think it might be better slower, other than that I must applaude your music, it was amazing so cuttos to you! Can't wait till ep.2 agus failte reoite!
p.s- I can be preety picky with charachter design, it's my forte, so I may place a high priority on it. If you want any more suggestions about it just e-mail me! I LIKAH TO HELP! I think you can on my account!

good

good animation, bad voices, weird plot

Well...

It is a good idea, and promises to be a good series, but, I have some suggestions:

Firstly, Just from seeing the first scene, I found it to be somewhat strange that there is a man of african descent in what appears to be an oriental setting.

Nextly, the dialogue is well thought out, however, I feel that you need to differentiate his voice to suit the moment, since it seems too casual. For example, in the beginning, he is clearn in a forlorn atmosphere, so try to make his voice sound more said.

Last, concentrate on trying to work with the dimensions of your main character. Several ways to do this are more emphasis on shading, or making his silhoutte more noticeable.

why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

im sorre if these will saund a lito rasest but wht is the choisen one a black man there evre were now days in evre god them move and know in here why i see less and less white man in moves anspesly main characters wys is thes hapening why god them it what next ~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~

sorre if these saunded ressist is there any one that soports my opinion p.s. sorre for spelling

Thought it was okay till i saw special features

I thought it was a nice flash till i saw your special features section, with that computer set up, music board, etc all in one room....

Not very hard to put a good flash together with that. So i gave all 5s for time.

Do we praise the rich man for buying a house?

DaDocta responds:

What are you talking about? Its not expensive to have a freaking keyboard dummy.. it is usb doen't come with sound.. I swear some of you speak/type before you even think.. Do we pay a damm rich man.. I'm as poor as anyone else.. Ever heard of credit cards?? maybe some Debt? This was just about as ignorant as they come..