Good, but not great.
Let's see... nice backgrounds, nice animation, nice music, mediocre voice acting, boring plot (at least in this chapter), and horrible character design.
Get some voice actors, improve the character designs (the eyes for fuck's sake, don't do them like that) and put some originality for the next chapter.
you could benefit greatly from a voice actor
voice actors... we work for free and we usually sound better than animators or their families. no offense... it's just that some people have voices that are made to be heard. give me a buzz if you want me to send you some samples... your toons are good as they are right now... but they would be better with my help. my aim is thatguyontheshow
Mm..
David, allow others into your heart! There's a reason all of the voices suck.
Also, try Not to capitalize Random Things like This.
Otherwise, not bad. :p
never got it
i didnt get this but you draw good and you got something going. Keep trying
Ok
Im sure it was great but i didnt even watch the whole thing because the voices were too damn annoying.