i dont get it...
the flow is not bad, really i got to say... the rhyme skeem is odd but im sure others will dig it, as a funny facter... its not HAHA funny or mild chuckle funny its kind of ah lot funny at all. the beat boxing was worth a "haha" and the OHHHHHHHH YEAH yeah that was dumb funny i say not bad worth a 5 in my book ( hot beat )
Well the only thing to get is that there is a guy who gets in a lot of trouble and then is rewarded by ice-cream.
Now for the video...
All that this is missing is a really clever video to go with it. Great lyrics, a really solid and simple, surprisingly, vibe, with alot of empty space in the track, makes it distinctly a light rap tune.
well of course! A video is in the works. :)
Meh...
"No influence whatsoever", huh? Sounds like you were under the influence of SOMETHING though.
Well if your trying to say I was under the influence of alcohol or drugs, you are basically insulting the entire music community. Sorry I tried to be funny. :/
His voice
His voice sounds like every other guy attempting to make comedy rap, flat, and boring. Still okay. 5/10 ; 2/5
His voice is the voice of someone who has never tried singing before. The voice is not what matters, it is the originality that counts.
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The flow is really bad, the rhymes are simple and cliche and not put together in an interesting way at all, the subject matter is well....yeah. I know this was just a joke mocking horrible mainstream rap, but you shouldn't get rap confused with deep meaningful indy hiphop. Please, venture outside of your tv set and radio before stereotyping an entire genre.
It really makes me sad that this is the stuff that gets on the front page on newgrounds.
First of all I'd like to see you come up with even one rap. This took me a long time to come up with. Secondly, I was not making fun of the rap genre I was simply making a joke rap. It is a comedy rap like "The Final Showdown" Also, I never was making fun of hip-hop in any way. I got this beat because it sounded kick ass, not because it sounded jokish. And wtf does the last sentence you said there even mean? Tv set? Radio? I never listen to radio and rarely watch TV so what makes you think I am stuck to those two?
Look, sorry you don't like the rap but don't try to make me look bad by insulting me.