not bad
i don't like rap at all but this was very good, not really rap liek some others said but it was pretty good, it would be funny to see a video for this.
Reviews for "The Ice-Cream Rap"
FatKidWitAJetPak responds:
Yeah we are in the works of a video. I hate rap as well, this is more of a flow making fun of rap.
Needless to say...
Someone will probably make a flash that goes to this song. Pretty funny song, dude.
FatKidWitAJetPak responds:
I sure hope so. As long as it is funny, I am proud of it.
I like the beat
You need a little more work on your flow though and sometimes you sing off tune, but other than that it was ok
FatKidWitAJetPak responds:
I agree actually. I sang this at complete random, simply because i wanted it to be a sort of improv thing.
Worth a few laughs
The song had a good beat, and you did have a suitable voice for the song. It was also worth some few laughs from everything from your lyrics, beat boxing, and even your singing. But I felt that the song would of been a hell of a lot better if you had put a chorus in this, it would have really tied in this song well.
FatKidWitAJetPak responds:
Yeah, i think i just need a better beat and I can sing some lyrics lol.
needs more SOUL