i don't care what they say, I like it
excellent, a little short but otherwise good. although mario would have owned
Reviews for "Brother Battle"
Good for a first
Nice sprite animation, but it was too short. I won't hold that against you because it's your first flash, but you do have room for improvement. It needed to be a little faster paced, and some actual voices would be nice instead of ones found in video games. The movement of the sprites and the sound synching was great, but some of the jokes I didn't find funny. Overall, great sprite animation for the first time, but you know what you need to improve.
Grade: B-
Guitardude responds:
Thank you for the review. And you know, you are right. I know I can improve. the second sprite flash movie i've been working on already has many little improvments. So by the looks of it, the next one should be better, and hopefuly longer.
This was yor first flash
Wow.
<Good Points>
The sprite quality was great, the sound was themed correctly, good violence, and some humor. I also like the extra outtakes and the menu also.
<Improvement>
The only thing that I don't like about this flash is it's too short.
4/5 homer8722
Guitardude responds:
Yes, one of the flaws I think I will always have as a flash artist is my lack of good length in flash movies. Although I do promise to work on this at the same time I think my flash style will always be a little short the way a lot of good flash "quickies" are. But rest asured this, as well with many other flaws I have/had, will be worked on.
Pretty Good!
A nice spritefight indeed! Smooth and simple animation, good sprites and decent battle motions. It's a bit short, but it's a good start, looking forward to the next one, keep it up!
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Not Bad
Well here goes, im in the mood to review so im gonna review every link i see and you get the honor of being first! I quite liked this, short and sweet, but you didnt offer an explanation as to why Mario and Luigi were fighting but nomatter.
Graphically its a sprite movie, hard to go wrong with these graphics wise unless your making your own sprite sheets lol, the animation wasnt half bad, seemed a little too slow at points but nevermind. The sound clips were good and fit well.
Overall i liked it, especially the scene with bowser crying at the end, major lol. ^_^
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