Not bad..
But really, you gotta fix the sound, I can't hear a dang thing!
I did like your animation though, very smooth and good.
Keep it up.
CZ
Reviews for "The Paperclip"
RareFactory responds:
Thanks, yeah, really sorry about the sound, but thanks!
Fifend
For great justice!
RareFactory responds:
...ooohkay, thanks!
well..
i hated it but i voted 5 because it was good and i thought it was good but it just didnt suit me but it deserves a 5
RareFactory responds:
I'm sorry you didn't like it, but thanks for voting 5 anyway!
good work, music advice
Nice work! It was entertaining with the random things that you came up with to show him getting pissed off. The music was important in your cartoon, so good work on your selection of music!
To boost the sound, add another audio layer with the music track starting at the same frame. You can "Copy Keyframe" and then "Paste Keyframe" when you have a new layer.
Good work!
RareFactory responds:
thank you for telling me this, I'll be sure to try that on my next flash if I find the sound really low, thank you for reviewing, and thanks for the advice!
Looks promising...
I like the animation. The music is good and the plot is fantastic. This may be your second flash, but you've made the progress and it's still on the way. Cheers for the effort well done.
RareFactory responds:
thank you very much.