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Reviews for "The Paperclip"

I loved it.

You don't need to boost the volume within Flash. If you're going to make Flash a major hobby in the future then you should use other programs to heighten the quality. Hell you can make sound clips louder in sound recorder(the program provided by windows: Start>Accessories>Entertainment>Sound Recorder.
It was good. Not the best, but good. Got some laughs out of it. keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing some future entries from you. Thanks fo the free protection point ^^. Getting quite a few blam points from all the crap thats coming in these days but not many protection points.

RareFactory responds:

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the advice. I'll be sure that in the next flash I make the sound is nice and loud (but not too loud, of course)

Haha I can so relate to that...

...which is probably a large part of the reason I enjoyed it so much. One of the things that makes a great flash is touching on a subtle point that seems to be a part of everybody's day-to-day life (especially one that annoys the crap out of people, Murphy's Law never fails to amuse), and expressing it in a humorous manner. You seem to have done that perfectly, I can't tell you how many times I've wasted hours on end looking for a simple object that turned out to be right under my nose, losing my sanity little by little. The graphics weren't the best I've seen, but they certainly did the job nicely all the same. I personally loved the style, the black and white fit very well for some reason. I also like how the character in the story had a blank face, simply because it could be the face of nearly anyone on this planet. The subtle humor throughout it was great, as was the more in-your-face humor, such as "Psychos in mirror are running faster than they appear." The musical choice was also very good, although the piece you used is something I consider to be a bit overused, it fit this flash perfectly, following the character right to the end of his trip to the brink of insanity. Great work, I hope to see more work like this from you that expresses the humor of everyday life.

RareFactory responds:

well thank you very much. It's good to know that my work is appreciated. I'm glad you caught the "psychos in mirror are running...etc" I thought it would go by too fast for most people to catch it. Thank you for your thoughts!

not bad

the guy needs a face though so u can show how angry he is

RareFactory responds:

I agree, but I suck at drawing faces. In my next flash though, faces for sure. Thanks for reviewing!

Loved it : )!

I really really loved this.. I thought it was great, the story was really good and relatable.. I mean who hasn't been frustrated when they can't find a paperclip or some other office supply? And the music fit with it to a T. Really great.

And funny! Hehee!

RareFactory responds:

thanks. I'm glad I'm not the only one that can't find things!

GREAT:D:D:D

Hahahaha great flash.. i think the punch line was alittle too.... predictable.. but it goes awsome with the music.. i love the bit with the hulk :P... whats the name of the song by the way?

RareFactory responds:

It's called "In the Hall of the Mountain King" by Edvard Grieg (from Peer Gynt Suite No. 1)