Woah. art, no kidding.
Well this piece was refreshing, but unfortunately the NG majority will not apreciate this, (SALAD FINGERS, CLOCK CRU, LOCK LEGION)
Any higher art would be lost on someone who creates garbage like those listed above.
Yours however was very well done, the graphics were good, considering you were attempting to make it look like a silent movie.
That little girl is adorable, I dont know how you managed to do it but when she was sad I was a little sad too.
As for the rest of the story line I would much like to know what message or emotion you are attempting to express, but like most poetry and art only the creator knows the true meaning.
I gave you a ten for sound even though there was a significant lack on any audio of any kind, which is what you intended, thus, objective achieved. Your style is so refreshing, a fact I think I've made clear befor I think... anyway, thank you for your contribution to the NGs pool of resources, even if Clock Cru ect. are inhabitting the same space. Sorry, I really don't like those things, (GET VOICE ACTORS YOU HIPPIES!) Uhhhm...
Any way thank you and such, I hope to see more.