Good ideas but..
I like it... was it for someone?.. You could fix the bullets a bit. because they only go one was it gets kind of boring, you could also add some more detail. Overall good job, and I liked the music, it was very fitting
Good ideas but..
I like it... was it for someone?.. You could fix the bullets a bit. because they only go one was it gets kind of boring, you could also add some more detail. Overall good job, and I liked the music, it was very fitting
thanks, actually yeah it's for my girlfriend, we've been in a very bad situation ever since we met. Thanks for the 8 though
Not what I expected.
I thought it was going to be a bullet actually going through people, after all, the rating WAS 17 +
Not bad though =D
thanks :D
lol
That's deep going. nice poem. Is this about somebody you loved?
yep
Wow....
I sometimes feel the same. heh. You write that?
touching and scary :-D
yes i did.
Wow
Man that must of took you a long time think up that, I sort of confused me but that was a buetiful message you should be a poem writer or maybe you are one already. Nice work.
Thanks :) i'm in a situation right now (pretty deep one) and the words just flowed into my head