This isn't terrible
What got me thinking it was bad was because of the limited animtion you had to use. I read your commentary about how the file size had to be small, so i'm happy you explained it. This only isn't good because of the waste of good drawing skills, what saved you was the forest scene, I like you you used the shadows in the forest, it was really a save to me. I also like the small file size, but I have cable as should dial up users should have.