Nice job.
If this was longer it would have gotten a 10. Nice job though.
Reviews for "Sky Raid (unfinished)"
Wow, that was pretty awesome.
The drawing style was definitely quality and the sound effects were great. Actually makes you feel a lust for violence, ya know?
More of this would be great.
aeroduro responds:
Thanks :)
Awesome!!
Whoa, that was especially cool. The shaking when the bombs landed was also to note. I can't describe the coolness any more, except a little more practice on the bombs/missile detail. Suggestions? Well, I think that in the beginning there wasn't a very effective introduction. I personally think you should include an airport, or better yet, a carrier on the seas. The jets fly off, the view switches to the front of the planes taking off, and in the background the carrier is nuked, and dialogue between the jets (2, 3, 4, jets or whatever) as to the next scene. Suddenly, enemy bombers and fighters arrive; ready to finish off the remains of the carrier. A dogfight engages, with a 'good guy' jet getting blasted (or just an engine jam ^.^) and spinning to the ground (in a horizontal direction, yet proceeding down, instead of a plain vertical dive. Include some of that great shaking detail in there too. When the good guys survive, with minor casualties, they proceed to their destination, wherever it may be. By now I think it'll be over, and the watchers will be left in awe and pondering what comes next. Looking forward to your stuff!
aeroduro responds:
Thanks for all those ideas, however they'd require me to almost start over completely and scrap alot of what I've done. Anyway maybe I will get this movie finished when I get a chance. :)
Unfinished.. not good
Looks great and all right now, but you should finish it.
And make the begging and ending scenes looks better... not very good quality compared to teh rest of it.
nice start
its pretty good, just sharpen up the sound, put in subtitles, and very nice graphics