Potential...
...if thats even how you spell it. This is great for you being so inexperinced! This simply shows that you can make quality work without having been hardcore for about 3 years at flash. Some people got it, some don't. I think you can go farrrrrrr.
Keep on Flashin,
~Boyd~
pretty good coulda been better
honestly the cartoon wasnt half bad caught my attention and not much does. I just had one thing that god me from the beginning that kinda made me question the artist. WHY didnt you give the man a knife. I knew he was a goner from the begging cause he was underequiped for the job.
O yeah and the alien eyes did him no justice either..
Well hey keep up the good work.
Good, but needs a few improvements..
Firstly, I thought it was quite good, I think the style you used was original and suited the content well. The drawings were very good also.
A few issues that you may wish to improve upon as you progress with Flash would be firstly the use of a preloader and play button. There are quite a few tutorials floating around and there is even a Newgrounds premade preloader for use. Secondly, please, for the benefit of loading time, learn to compress the sound files you use to a lower bitrate (you can do this through the Library, and going into properties of the music file and changing the bitrate to something like 24kbps). This will dramatically help to lower the overall movie size, with not too much of an effect on the sound quality.
There will no doubt be some criticism of this from the reviewers, try to take some advice out of it rather than insults.
Overall I thought it was very good for a Flash 'noobie', all the best for your future movies.
I'm not using flash mx, I'm using Toon Boom which you can't make play buttons etc with...
It isn't a movie
It's a slideshow of pictures with bgm. No music compression, no sound, no animation, no preloader, no "play" button. It may have style, but it isn't a flash movie.
nice
well yes the movement and things are a little crappy but i think your artistic abilities are awesome. you have a different style. i like it. so make yourself some time to work on motions and maybe more sound editing then create a new 1 and post it.
Good Luck