it was better than the first ones
a few things that could be better:
1. Make the crowd move
2. Gary should lose a few times to keep the story going (I know he's based on you and he's supposed to be badass, but it gives it a sense of wanting to watch it more, because if you make others then people wont want to watch the new ones)
3. The ground logo on Gary's intro - I dont have a problem with it its just it doesn't line up with the whole ground (This ones not a very big deal)
4. The table with the coffee & stuff on it - why don't you just get a normal table?
These are just some suggestions.
anyway, it was better than the others, keep it up & PLEZ make more.