The visuals are perfect, but...
The voicework seems a bit tired and forced. Pay attention to how people talk to eachother everyday, observe how much enthusiasm they put into it depending on the topic, and maybe that will help. If you can improve the voice talent skills, I've no doubt that your flashes will be top notch. Otherwise, you've done very well.
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Good
Me likey
Pretty good
Your really good with the artwork and the story has a lot of potential.
Even your dialog was good...all up until you introduced the enemy. Theirs was real...corny and over done. Like out of any good vs. evil anything (game, book, movie, etc). Kind of took away from it for me.
Other than that, real good job.
Good
The graphics are great but i just dont think much of the storyline
You could at least try and be original man.
Dude you played so much off of fable it isnt funny. You even used the term "focus stone", not only did you do that you copied the exact story line. A supposed good wizard is a servent to the evil master or whatever who is trying to get the sword of power. You even used the wall carvings to portray the story just like in fable. The art was good, but the complete copying of fable even lowered the art quality for me. try and be more original.
Actually it is funny. We have never even seen any of that game, let alone played it. Not to mention Fantastic Realm has been a working story since 1993! Sorry to blow your theory to hell. Fable, eat your heart out! ;)