could be better
While it was very nice and well made, i think you'd be much better off without the stick figures.
I know it's the style you wanted but it is way too overused on newgrounds and you are good enough to make them proper people.
But otherwise nice, especially the sounds.
It's.. Stick..
I Enjoyed it at first, really neat feel to it.. you know, the church part, especally.. I lost interest afterthat part.. I Felt really sad that that one stick figure died! -
But.. The whole stick thing, has been majorly over used.. you seem to have really good skill at how to work things; i'm sure you could make somthing less sticky.. But it's a great flash. A little darker on some parts may have helped, aswell. ^^
This would get a much higher mark
If you animated real people not just sticks. You can draw pretty well fromt he scenery etc and the story, music etc all works pretty well and this could certainly be a good series, but try drawing the people properly its not as if the stick figures are massively animated anyway it would be a pretty dam good series if you did this but for a stick movie it is pretty good
Could have been better.
I didn't really like some of the music. The fighting and the intensity could have been better but instead it was just okay. Not the best but it was okay. Would been nice if it was long have better fights. One more thing when that one girl reloaded her XM8 she pulled nothing. The cocking pin on the XM8 is on the same place where the bullet chamber is. You did the reload if you were to reload a m4 carbine or a m16a1 or m16A2. And trust me I know my guns.
nice
but what happened to that chick from the beginning