Hey... I've seen this before...
Practically everything in this flash is taken from Disgaea, not inspired by, but taken, pure and simple. Amateur voice acting just doesn't compare to the originals, especially when they're mostly imitations of the english voice actors. A lot of the humor was lost in poor (and slow) delivery of lines. There were a number of times when not only were the lines delivered slowly, but they were inaudible, as well. The animation here is fluid - it still follows most of the choreography from Disgaea, so I wouldn't call it inspired - and in the few cases where it's different, it isn't different enough to matter. The one thing in this flash that entertained me for a moment was a certain crazily laughing Angel. That was a take on Disgaea - not directly ripped - making it one of the few pieces of semi-original material in this flash. Taking the series to an extreme and adding some new flavor is a good thing, it proves that you can do more than animate a few pre-made sprites and add some voices. Normally, I wouldn't be so hard on a flash, but since your voices are clear imitations of the originals and all animation/dialogue is similarly ripped, there's nothing else to go on. For Episode V I sincerely hope that you get more than few seconds of semi-original material. And if you just want to do a tribute to Disgaea by doing scenes, make a collage of events throughout the game, don't rehash the story, Episode by Episode.