I dislike the fact...
That you copied the script, aswell as the pics from the game. The pics are alright i guess, as sprite authors do that all the time. Though I must say i was disapointed when i Noticed the script was fairly the same as in the game.
I must commend you of the voices though, they are very like the original, if you did not copy them aswell, i'd say that the voiceacting is pretty good.. Except laharl which is not quite as simliar though has a slight similarity.