heres why the low marks
it seems to me that you wanted to make a serious piece. if that was the case then you should not have put in little jokes like "free escape" unproductive Jews. way outa place in this piece ... in terms of the animation ... it was a little rough in areas of transition and motion ... work on that and im sure youll improve. just try to stick with your genre. if your doing serious go serious ... if your going drama go drama ... dont make a drama with a joke in the middle somewhere ... confuses the audience.