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I am extremely offended that someone with such weak animation skills would try to address such sensitive subject material. Your feeble and unoriginal "South Park" style makes a cartoony mockery of the deaths of millions of people. Don't try and say you made this out of sympathy with your bullshit sappy ending credits, because it obviously serves no purpose other than to let you get off on drawing some fake deaths. Please don't submit again.
What does animation skills have to do with the holocaust? You're just an eye candy whore.
Good Job!
Overall, you did a very good job in presenting the feeling and look of the camps, as well as the horror. You also did a good job in setting the tone for the scenes, the hoplessness of their plight came through.
Two things you could work on are your drawing skills (although you did show a unique style just waiting to be refined) and the music. The music really helped set the mood, but the first song cut off abruptly and the second one started just as abruptly. If you tried to use a sound editing program and perhaps fade the music in and out, it wouldn't be so jolting.
Keep at it! That was excellent for your first flash!
Hey thanks alot, don't worry I can draw pretty good but I had to rush alot. Maybe i'll do a remake for this one and make it nice now that I have the time and know way more about flash :)
Touching....
Touching and true...I realize the saddeness of the holocaust but the way your back ground was it just made it look like it was a funny thing .Like the ...(Patients->) and the mice just staring its a lil funny but good job.. nice touching "reach-out"
Thanks!
Hey man, dont listen to them
The other people who blammed this saying theres no meaning live their lives in a damn tunnel, this stuff has more truth than you think.. i liked the flahs.. except for your stated music problem.. the flash had a few bas points.. on the fade outs... some items faded quicker than the others so body parts were shown... try also doing a fade to black on the whole flash so its not as noticeable.. i liked sadness you put into it... i would have liked the voices to be added. not even words just a *bu bleh* something that you can barely hear above the music.... i liked the bird flying in front of the camera and the walk off at the end.. you have talent that so many here lack.. anyways im sure this may be too long so ill be going.. i Hope this was helpfull...
~peace~ FREAK
PS: OH please... reply.. what was the second song in this flash.. i really liked the music choice.. i just cant find the second song ebcause theres no spellable lyrics to search for to find the song.. THANKS.
Thanks for the comments ^-^.
The last song is called "Blackhawk Down theme" pretty much. It's by Hans Zimmer.
wtf?
wow, that was one shitty flash. the "graphics" were terrible, so was the animation, the first song just cut out and it made no sence and had no plot or story. the message at the end was the only thing that was well put together, however i think that it was taken from a book or a quote or something. sorry, but that was shit. blam it.
Wow...please read the comment I made about the flash itself.