Awesome!
I loved the animation and style, so a 10 for both of those, the sound was great so a 10, violence got a 5 because there wasn't blood and stuff but you kinda saw stick figures dying, lol, and 5 interactivity for the button hehe, and humor was pretty good so a 5, and I emailed you =D so that why this isn't talking about how much I liked it, it's in the email!
i didnt laugh
but i liked it. quite strange, which ive been seeing more often on newgrounds and that sutes me just fine. very dark, i liked how it just got started off very randomely, with the die-ry, and progressed. good folow through. can we hope to see a continuation of journal enteres?
I Know The Feeling...
Reminds Me Of The Kind Of Stuff I Used To Write/Draw When I Was In High School. "Die-ry" He He He.
Loved it
It reminds me of a Rube Goldberg machine (except that his have things get triggered off by other things). I can't really say any more than, what do you think the smoke stacks were for (I'm implying that the body burger is burned after)? And try to take some inspiration from Hitler, he tortured them, worked them, starved them, then burned their bodies, and took the Jew's valuables. Good job.
Wow simply great!!!!
Awesome idea and style first off. You dont usually see a flash with that sort of fell to it. The animation was definitely a nice change and not only that but they were well done. The voice acting was absolutely perfect for the feel i think you were trying to make. You know it was kind of eerie but at the same time funny. There actually wasnt violence but i gave it some points to you not only cuz this flash rocked but the violence was spoken of.
A few problems and concerns however. Firstly, this was too short. I was enjoying it so much then it just ends.So that was a sad moment for me.
Secondly, I dont want this style to get repetitive too quickly so try to put some of William's actions in too.
Thirdly, actually i forgot so just keep with it....
So ya continue with the series. And dont forget to change the styles slightly throughout your future installments in the series. Wow this is one of my best reviews not my longest however. So do you play videogames? anyways greta job again. And once again keep with it! 5/5
So do I play videogames? Well, I used to, until school started taking up lots of my free time...
Don't worry, it's not going to be the same thing over and over. I'd rather make a single good episode than ten near-identical ones. And there will be more 'real life' shots of William in the second one.