Reviews for Diary of William Ostler

[nbrnnan]

meh....

this was a little above average but not by much. the graphics were really good, as well as the sound. i like the premise of a Die-ry but i thought the overall idea of the malcontent, semi-homicidal boy finding pleasure in writing in his diary about death and coming to the conclusion that it's cathartic is too overdone. minimal violence can be accounted for, if any. and i really didn't find it too funny, but that may just be me. in all however, i really enjoyed the flash but still found a lot of it's flaws cumbersome. sorry.

[High-Roller]

loved it

so cool, very creative, kinda creepy -- can't wait to see more from you

[Pyro62S]

Nice

Very creative. I especially liked the music. And the overall concept was just really cool. Keep it up.

[Zer0Vampire]

Awesome!

Nice man, I enjoyed that. It was definetaly random, but random is usually the best! keep up the good work!

[EggyF]

Nifty Idea

I liked the idea, I should send my friends to that place. And I liked how you actually tried making it look like pencil drawings with a masking effect.
My only problem with the graphics, is that the characters outlines were to sketchy. You should also think about actually animating his little drawings the way he thinks they would move. But make them stop moving after he stop talking about them. You know hat I mean

t3h-m4tt responds:

Yeah, I thought about that... but I don't want to get to much in to unrealistic stuff (as weird as that may seem, coming from a guy whos main character is a blue-furred purple-haired whatever-he-his)

The outlines are supposed to be sketchy, of course... it's actually more work to make them sketchy than to make them smooth. It's a style thing.