YOU NEED SOMETHING!!!!
THIS IS WHAT YOU DO: Go contact a Japanese Anime producer and get this crap published man. You have the story line and it might need a little more depth to it for anime big time but you still got a great story. This flash was great and I would love to see it on the shelves of my local blockbuster! If it had voices and stuff like anime and moved so smoothly then I would pay to see it and sit for hours watching episode after the next... Good work!