not bad
Gotta hand it to you, the sound was great, I dont think you should add voices to the people like some people have said, It would draw away from the music, which I considor to be a big part of the story...I like your use of blood towards the beggining:)
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this is a pretty good peice of work a job well done keep it up
! one thing though i think u should get some people to do voices this movie wuold be fabualous with voices:)
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This has anime series written all over it.
Great submission. Two things bothered me though.
The graphics were okay but you could have made it much better if you had put in some overnighters for the details and some overall fine tuning. There were parts where it was hard to tell what was going on but I could see your style after watching it a few times through.
Although the sound was acceptible it could've used some voiceovers. I can understand why you would't though because the rest of the flash was great and the style in which you gave the story was great as well so voiceovers weren't neccesary and may of infringed on the rest of the experience.
Overall, you could either improve upon the graphics and the sound but I wouldn't change or tweak anything else.
nice art...
good art and animation...maybe voice would'have added more to this kind of movie...and i bet it would made the score go higher too...for future episodes you should try to stay away from the cliches...the "bad dream" start...the usual project going wrong..etc...i'm telling you this cuz i used the same start/story 2 years ago and i have seen it so many times...before and after i did it..i was told a lot of people how cliche my movie was...and i knew it but i was just starting...hahaha..
anyway good luck with future episodes...and watch some of the details like the guarsd lying dead on the floor but moving in opposite direction to the floor...