Modern art
I dont know what to say, everything has pretty much been said already, but there are a few points i really need to give some credit. I thought the music from metal gear was definately suitible for this movie. THe sounds were great, though there was no speech =( I am definately gonna watch eps when it comes out.
You gotta grow!
I can't really share anything that hasn't been expressed already.
I can sort of make out boundaries you've set up for yourself in the flash; even in the nice hand-drawn graphics and the blood (very good job on the blood) I could see the background items (like corpses or blood splatters) that were tweened against the background movement, so you might want to add some extra layers just to play it safe. What I'd also recommend is reviewing any positions the humans excecuted that you saw as less-than-satisfactory, and start drawing them to familiarize yourself with smoother actions.
Just remember, the bar has lifted significantly since flashes even a year ago: people expect decent voice acting in something like this, but if you expound on your drawings and add some more originality to the story you'll definately get away with some more fives.
I'll look forward to seeing your next flash in my inbox, but until then, don't stop growing!
Did need voice acting, excellent.
It was like a movie, but it did need voices. Like maybe far off in the back echoy things for the very end and stuff. Well done, can't wait to see how all the rest turns out.
Very nice
Story line is awesome, as well as the animation.
Good
I reckon two things could've improved this:
Voice acting and drawing perspective.
In some of your artwork (Don't get me wrong, it is very good) the perspective, especially of slumped bodies is slightly off. It's only a minor issue, but it does detract from the graphics.
I say this a lot, but voice acting is really important, especially with dramatic movies such as this. Afterall, flash movies come from Visuals AND sound. You had a good choice of music, but voice acting I think would add a lot to the movie.
Anyways, good piece, I'm anticipating the other episodes.
-Hannibal-