Cliche.
Could that have used any more cliches? Even the name makes me think less of you as a human being. "S.I.N: SEED HUNTER" oh my god. and "a man who is not bound to the chanins of fate and makes his own destiny" wtf? whats a chanin? please use more english when creating sentences. And why do all your people look deformed? you could have drawn them in paint, and made them look better. Please, no more.
Omnilurk is one to talk
See how his small part in the amateur flash was pretty damn horrible in it's own right....amateurs shouldn't speak on amateurs like their pros.
This wasn't too bad...can't really speak on syncing cause there was no voice to sync on so yet another thing Omnilurk can't speak on either not everyone has a microphone or recording equipment. The smoke effect from the barrel was nice....although I think you could have turned the opacity down (alpha channel) to make it look a lil more see through...it's a cartoon so it's not meant to be realistic but it adds an extra umph and knack for detail. There's a lot of talent here and I think w/the more flash you do the better you'll get.
Explain the 5 W's.
You need to bring it together more. You need to explain WHY his codename is ILL, WHO he is, WHY he is so fast, WHAT SEED's really are. WHO is that woman, and WHY does she want that data? The Who, and the What's, and the Why's need to be answered. Choppy, and i dislike how he was drawn on his side on the floor, looked like he had two fingers holding the trigger of a triangle. Explain the plot before you get to action.
Pretty good...
It was OK. The blood was well done, but the flash was very choppy. Maybe it is because you are not used to fbf or are just lazy. The art was absolutely horrible most of the time. And the lip synching was worse. The use of voices would have been nice, seeing as i hate to read when watching something cuz its distracting. Other than all that it was pretty good...
Good First Epsiode
I like how you left off at a suspenseful moment and I leave me wanting to see more.
I enjoyed your graphics. Yet I felt that it was a bit choppy and jumpy and that there was no real fluidity in the motion of the characters or other moving objects. If you increased, the number of picture/frames in between it would help to resolve this.
I also would like to hear voices for the characters. The subtitles are good but you just do not get the emotion that you would get from having dialogue.
Hope this is helpful and cannot wait to see more :)