'I like what you're doing here a lot
Only real suggestion is add the credits like you said, and also try using a normal person instead of a stick. People at newgrounds tend to not like sticks for some reason, but it would be pretty easy to draw a semi-okay person. THe animation in the later half is pretty good, but 90% of portal voters won't wait that long to vote, so maybe some more eye candy earlier on. I really like it though.
i liked the part where the guy died
it was ok. it didnt hav much of a point though. i thought the music fit the mood operfectly though.
it was okay
that other guy don't mind him hes a jackass i thought it was ok and a little funny
Personally It blew
i skydive for a living.... and that was just HORRIBLE, drawings were aweful, and anyways you always have a reserve chute... if one does 'crap' as you say, there is still a 99% chance you will live, second you dont go feet to earth to pull, you go belly to earth, and lastly, people dont splat, they bounce, just a lil off the ground, would be better if he made a crater, or something but jeeze, do some fucking research first
ok
not too bad.... or good, but the music was cool though.