better than me
I cant do any better so no camplaints here and loved the red hot chillipeppers in the backround. whoever that other guy is who took this enrty so seriously is a complete moron because he decided to comment that you don't jump head first instead the fact that guy rode a plane for a bit.... way to go tearing apart peoples dreams
not bad
but to they guy before me raggin on you, its an artistic expression! it wasnt meant to be a documentary chill the fuck out!
well dont have much to say
its a preatty good simple movie
yah its simple but its alrite i gues
o yah you piked a perfect song for this
Just try better next time but this is good
wasnt bad
lol , that was simple but wasnt that bad
and the background music was good
red hot owns =)
pce!
'I like what you're doing here a lot
Only real suggestion is add the credits like you said, and also try using a normal person instead of a stick. People at newgrounds tend to not like sticks for some reason, but it would be pretty easy to draw a semi-okay person. THe animation in the later half is pretty good, but 90% of portal voters won't wait that long to vote, so maybe some more eye candy earlier on. I really like it though.