It's still very good.
But you slip. The beginning is pure awesome. And then the slow part comes along and it feels so out of place, and the part after that fails to get you pumped up and dancing again. This song suffers from inconsistency problems, just like Chaoz Impact, although in this one its much more apparent. Pick a tone and a theme and stick with it. Inconsistency can work, but it's very very hard, and music is all about being able to get lost in the rhythm.
That's my two cents. Don't feel down though, your still an awesome musician.