Reviews for My GOD, Robots! episode 2

[jimbob2000]

Decent Short

Art is more passable than in many N.A. cartoons. Style (delivery) was original enough to make me want to give it a shot. I found the sounds slightly lacking, as some soundbytes seemingly were missing. Relative comedic violence was quite well enjoyed. I gave Interactivity an above average score(for a non-gaming category) mainly because this piece has its way of drawing the viewer in. With development, I'd suggest finding a way to put this show on television. It's scope is overall that of a growing story with plots, the sporadic humour in all its forms here were quite appropriate. Work on this series, it will be nice to see.

[Vanpire-jack]

good..

yeah, nt to bad.. i like the part where he says *dont question the doctor * and kills the little girl, that was cool ,!!!!

[calculon000]

Excellent animation, poor dialog clarity.

The animation was smooth and high-quality. The plot is decent and of what can be expected from a submission like this. The humor seems to break down into 40% physical humor, 20% jokes that are funny because they are immature, and 40% random humor.

The one qualm I have about this submission is that the dialog is very hard to understand. The people doing the voices seem to mumble constantly, and the volume for said voices has volume that is too low in relation to other sound effects, making it hard to understand what the characters are saying.

Clean up the sound, and you will have yourself one of the better series on Newgrounds!

[Reno-Lockhart]

I love this series

having phil dead in the backround picture was a very nice touch,
if I'm right Dan Paladin, and mat wilson where huge insperation to this and your artwork. (if I'm right)*smiles*

[GrammarFascist1]

You have potential

***Warning - Spoilers***

The best part of both episodes so far is the intro - the origional music and title sequence is great. I also like the fluidity (high framerate) and unique style of your art.

Some of your humor, like the BET sequence, is quite good, but other things, like the little girl in the hospital is just not funny, and works against the story. If we're going to sympathize with your character stuck in robotland, then having him indescrimanantly murder a child who gave her kidney to save his life just to get a laugh isn't the way to go. He doesn't have to be a goody-two-shoes, but c'mon!

I think you have a lot of potential here. I would suggest spending more time thinking over your story and focus.