mr. insomia777 eh?
nice dailogue and writing,
pretty funny and totally incoherent.
the animation was very silky smooth
and at a constant framrate, some of
the best fbf animations i have seen in
awhile. the characters out of body
porportions give it a very unique
look and sense of style. the voicework
further adds character to the characters.
though the absense of music and sfx effects
were a little disconserning and would of
improved the cartoon a lot more.
though in the next episode, could
you try to pace out the scenes a
bit more, it seemed a little too
fast to comprehend what is
going on and might of been
intentional. if it was suppose to
be...INCOHERENT! :P
though, an off topic comment,
do you have a profile on deviant
art's website? because i remember
seeing some animation test of the
characters in motion? either that or
your style is very similiar to his,
regardlessly, i wait for another
itteration of the series. oh yeah...
please add a preloader onto the
cartoon next time.
score: ****
kudos,
Mj