GREAT VOICE
Your boive blows me away man. Its freaking orgasmic really. The only thing that I didnt like was your high voice peak at 1:02 and the strange start off. Everything else sounded fantastic. This song felt the need for an electric guitar solo though and some kick ass drums. The drum loop in the background was nice, but didnt fill in that emptiness.
The lyrics were very addictive and nice! I always liked it when you said I was there to stay and how was there a way? Your quite a nice writer.
OH I just noticed that small electric guitar in the background, but you should have boosted it up by A LOT. Get that bass out man!
Peace. Oh and your getting top of the week I know it! >:/