Very nice and something original
This isn't something you see a lot on NG... unless I don't pay attention at all. But, there needs to be some ending. Yes, everything is made good, and the story is great, but it's not really complete. I'd like to see an ending.
one thing missing
I was kinda expecting the old man who created them to step in or at least see what he had done, maybe that what u meant by him shivering under the covers but to me he just looked scared and confused. I was kinda choked by the ending
Yes, at the end he realizes what he has done but is too terrified to do anything about it in time. Plus... would YOu want to step into a fight between axe weilding robots?? I doubt it =P
A Moving Story
I really liked this piece. From start to finish I felt immersed in the story and animation. It's not a really deep story, but probably one a lot of people can relate to.
Art was simplistic, use of shade and shadow, no lines which is fast becoming a popular style today. Colours were all in blocks, something I find myself usually complaining about because it irritates me, but I'll let it pass this time.
The animation I thought was a little hesitant at times, it didn't flow well at certain points in the movie, but having said that, it didn't stop the flow of the movie as a whole, it kept it going.
The music was what really immersed me in it. It puts you in a hypnotic state more than anything in the film. It was a good mix which draws you in and makes you feel more for tha robot. A really good subtle tune, I love it.
Great idea for a story, pretty powerful, hope to see more like this.
~Rhyth~
Good job on this.
Well, I cant top the review before this one, and I agree with basically everything Bezman said, so I can only say so much. I liked the transitions you used in between scenes, like the one after The grey Robot is running with the guy, then it zooms out of the window and rotates to the guy in bed. The music does help the mavie a lot, and I can't think of anything that can improve it. Adding sound might not accomplish what you were going for, and I personally liked it without sound. So, very nice work onm this one, and as always I hope to see more from you. Oh, and I also liked when the Robot and the guy High Fived. That was pretty funny.
hey, Thanks for yet another review!! I always look forward to seeing yours. Glad you liked the movie. Hehe, and the high five part made me laugh as well when I was making it.
awwww
That was so sad. poor robot. all he wanted to do was serve that guy. it kinda tells ya a lot about human nature, though. How we forget ou favorite things because something 'new' or ' better' comes along. Good movie. sad and depressing, waah,but good.