good for a first
This wasn't that great. But you definately have potential. Add a plot, and brush up on arrt a bit, and you could have something good.
Reviews for "MC: Without a Plot"
Masso responds:
Thanks!
I'll do better next time!
Not bad.. In fact I liked it!
It looks good, the drawings are nice, but it would be better if you had some transitioning animation, instead of just switching scenes and having them in different locations. If you can make smooth animated transitions, maybe even fbf(frame by frame) transitions, this could be front page material (if you got some more 'plot' in the search for a plot =P) overall, keep up the good work... remeber, hard work pays off =D
Masso responds:
Ya, hard work does!
I'll take note of this.
THANKS!!!
Not bad
Better than I expected, could use some improvement, but it's not like "0mG wut 4 shi77y fl4Sh".
4/5
AUb
Hey, an actual attempt at a god flash!
Good job, you didn't put an annoying "Help me i'm a n00b that doesn't think things through" Flash. a 3 from me!
Masso responds:
Ya, I'm not that bad!
Thanks!
Well good start
well it needs a plot (lolz it was fine) i liekd it but never say "this is my first flash" or "Go easy on me" it sounds noobish
Masso responds:
Ya, I shouldn't have said that...