Not bad
Very nice work with the walking/running, was it rodoscoped? And the storyline sounds inertesting.. I liked the qoute. Not much to improve upon except to make the fighting smoother.
Reviews for "Shades of Grey Ep. 1"
SirGaryColeman responds:
It was 3D. And yes, I will try to fix the fighting choreography. I found out that two of the best fighting flashes: Flashes like Ninjai and Genryu's Blade either had professional fighters choregraph (ninjai) or did a ton of research on fighting stances (Genryu), so I'll probably have to brush up on some of that too, since I know very little about fight choreography.
Needs Work
I really enjoyed this episode, however I do beleive it needs to be improved. Both the animation quality and the sound quality was excellent but I felt it was slow in parts. I really like the beginning but I thought the fight scenes was sort of slow. Overall though good job and I look forward to the next episode.
SirGaryColeman responds:
The next episode is out already, hopefully you'll enjoy it more. Pacing is better.
Pretty good
The Art was really great. I really like the voice acting, but that fight scene sucked ass. Everything else is fine, but the fight scene really messed it up. If ur makin a movie that has alot of fighting, u need to have good fight scenes. Some might be willing to compromise, but most of us aren't. I hope the other ep.s have better fight scenes.
SirGaryColeman responds:
Yes, the fight scene does suck ass. :( I think they improve later on a little bit, though.
awesome graphics
the whole being left in the dark thing doesnt quite work for me, but those graphics are so smooth, how did you do that?
I liked this.
Though sometimes the blood and angles would look off, the animation is great. Maybe if you put the characters speech as subtitles rather than in the comic style bubbles it would look a little more 'clean'.
The music is good, and the sound effects were perfect. Will definitely be looking at the later episodes.