Ok
this was not bad,i know you put alot of work into this,but next time try and make it alittle faster(the intro)waiting for the fighting was about the only bad part(intro. to there names took awhile)
Reviews for "VG Wars: Episode #1"
It was ok
There are so many sprite battle flashes out there this isnt really original at all nor is it as well done as others out there. The fighting moves are repetitive the script is really bad and you might consider no talking in your future episodes. Whey was luigi talking about hating mario since they first met? THEIR BROTHER!!! SUPER MARIO BROTHERS!!! emphisis on the brothers just curious there. Other then that try to create better action dont use the same fight moves over and over again try to find better sounds and please PLEASE make it move faster. I though my computer froze when they were introducing the characters and it stayed at that screen for like 30 seconds. But it was a great first flash just alot of kinks to work out.
Lots of things you need to fix...
When someone does an attack, you dont just stand there! That bugged me a lot. And the red hot combo took forever and nothing even happened. Mario was up in the air and never came down, where did he go? Bowser took forever to stop... These things annoyed me... Fix them, make it more fast paced, and you got it in the bag. Maybe add some voices or make a plot? Its not like Madness or anything because that is ussually really cool that it doesnt even need a plot. Yours might...
good
nice animation but it seemed to take like 5 minutes to get the movie goin, and i lost intrest
Good,buts needs to be speed up ,tweeked abit
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