Horrible voices.
This is probably something you wouldnt know, but Johnny has sickly yellow skin and really dark blue hair. The voices were terrible. Johnny isnt supposed to be some dark evil guy with a raspy voice. He's supposed to be a goth guy who other than killing people is pretty normal aside from being insane (if that makes sense). Make Johnny's voice seem a bit happier about what he's doing instead of trying to scare the guy and it will be a lot better.
I second the guy who says you killed JTHM
His voice sounds so level and so detached. His reasons for killing people generally were more animated. He was a curious boy, and wanted to see what made good people different from bad people... and then on occasion he just killed because he felt like it.
Anyway, the first bit was a rip from the Lenore flashes.
And then the zim music? It didn't really fit. It felt like you just grabbed bits from all over the place and didn't create anything greater than the sum of its part, if it's even near the sum of its parts.
haha, yeah, maybe I based TOO much in the other works by jhonen haha..
you made johnny sound like a fag
WTF Make your own stories and leave the comic alone!
(sigh)
i can tell by seeing the jthm preview and this shit that jthm was not ment to be made into a flash movie or any type of movie
Creativity? What the hell is that?
First, the intro is a ripoff of the intro for the official Lenore flash series. Second, you used music off of Invader Zim for the background music. Also, your voice for Nny sucked. Although, it was probably just your regular speaking voice, so I guess that's not your fault.
Yeah, I know, the intro its fault of my lack of crativity :P, and what wrong with the IZ music?I tough it suited well, and thats not my voice, because Im a girl and english is not my primary lenguaje so yeah, and the voice actor has never read JTHM before so maybe thats why :P