Nice
Good for a first!
Reviews for "Star Wars: Coming Soon"
silentmike86 responds:
thanks glad you liked it
Good
That was well done for a first, only problem is the sound. I couldn't hear anything! But everything else was great! Cant wait for the full thing!
silentmike86 responds:
Thanks, the next wont have any sound problems
Seen the real thing this only shows a small sample
Dan showed me the first two episodes of it. I love it. However, this is a review of the trailer. Its a quite nice parody of the trailer to episode 3. Some bits could have been better but it was overall good. Looking forward to seeing the real thing on Newgrounds.
silentmike86 responds:
hehe cheers mate
better than mine
pretty good the animation is a little choppy and the drawing was how do i put this "crappy" but for your first flash it was awesome sure as a heck lot better than my first
silentmike86 responds:
thanks
Hm.
I really don't know what to think of this--as it is your first flash. Obviously you need to develop your own style, but if you work on your skills, I think some of your future flash will turn out nicely. The biggest problem with this one were that it looked like you got somewhat lazy in some parts, such as the lip synching, arm movements, and when the two ships collided. Not too bad for your first, though.
silentmike86 responds:
Yeah I couldn't get the ships crashing to look how I wanted it, and I must admit I’m not keen on how it looks. For the main one I will do better mouths, with teeth and stuff, and I will make sure there will be no rubbish explosions ether. Thanks for the review